Polish Chapter 1 wording and standards references#97
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Thanks again. I think H.232 might have been a typo for H.323, but H.264 works well given that we call out video specifically. You've also found a family of bugs from the 5E->6E conversion in which some words that were formatted as sans serif got dropped altogether - hence the missing words in a few cases.
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This PR applies a first editorial pass across Chapter 1 (Foundation) with high-confidence wording and consistency fixes.
Summary of changes:
foundation/problem.rst,foundation/software.rst, andfoundation/trend.rst.foundation/architecture.rst("more than one protocol").foundation/architecture.rst:802.3 Ethernet+802.11 Wi-FiH.264video encoding standardfoundation/performance.rst(adds missinglatency,RTT, andlinkin transfer-time discussion).Validation:
make spellingsuccessfully (existing repo-wide spelling warnings remain unchanged).